Wednesday, June 21, 2023

Linca

Linca sighed when Jims entered the lab. He was such a pompous schmuck and she knew today was going to be a bad one because of her report from the day before.

Jims grinned at her. “How are your alien buddies today? Get any pings on the screens last night?”


She ignored him and kept her focus on her data. No one in the community wanted to hear her theories. They were all convinced she was ridiculous and gullible. Too imaginative for science.


She knew better. The data showed too many anomalies to be created by space debris. There were patterns she couldn’t ignore and those patterns weren’t random. Intelligent life had made them. Linca was convinced they were attempts at communication and that they were close.


Jims laughed loudly. “Nothing to say Linca? No incursions from little fuzzy blobs last night? Or maybe they’re slimy talking spheres?”


Linca’s skin flushed but she refused to be baited into a conversation that would only get worse if she responded. Instead she pulled up another screen and input the data she'd gathered from the bursts of light she’d spotted the day before.


Jims kept up his taunting, playing to the audience of other scientists in the room. Most of them refused to get involved, but a few snickered along.


Deciding to try something different, Linca copied the light burst data and sent it out through their own equipment on the top of the facility. Maybe she could record a reaction. When nothing happened immediately, she tried at a different angle. And again. Space was vast and even a 0.001% angle change covered a huge territory.


When her station beeped, it took her a moment to register that she had a response. Coincidence?


She input the data again, but this time she repeated it twice. It came back twice. When she changed it up again, the response changed as well. Was it some kind of echo? Had Jims played with her equipment?


A klaxon sounded and everyone in the room stilled. She sent out another light test. When it came back, Linca whispered into the room. “They’re answering.”


Complete silence greeted her until the klaxon sounded again. An automated voice announced. “Breach in the atmosphere above Quanta Station. Incoming object of unidentified origin and design.”


Linca leapt from her seat and out the door. She heard footsteps behind her as she raced to the lift. Jims squeezed in before the doors shut, his face flushed. “You’ve gone too far this time, Linca. If this is some kind of trick you've set up to make us believe your little theories, you're finished here.”


The doors opened and she didn’t bother answering as she raced for the final staircase. It was fifty steps up but she didn’t slow. At the top, she slipped on the protective breathing apparatus. A few steps behind her, Jims did the same. This time without sneering.


They stepped into the pressurized vestibule and waited while their cleaned air was exchanged for what covered their planet. No longer breathable by any of their species.


As soon as the doors opened, Linca raced forward onto the planet's surface. A huge shadow was the first sign, but it was quickly followed by an enormous shape dropping through the clouds. A huge cylinder surrounded by smaller cylinders on all sides.


She heard Jims muttering behind her but didn’t take her eyes off the enormous cylinder as it rotated and landing gear descended. It settled without a sound.


Linca approached slowly, watching for an indication of the beings that must be inside. Finally a section near the bottom slid away and a staircase lowered.


Three beings appeared. Taller than her species. Bipedal with two upper limbs as well. Similar to her own, but with longer limbs. Their faces in shades of brown sat atop their bodies and they had hair or fur on the tops of their heads.


They wore no protective equipment and didn’t seem bothered by the air as they descended. These beings could breathe oxygen.


Linca approached and stopped when she was close enough to converse. She’d imagined this moment so many times, she knew exactly what she wanted to say. She pointed to herself first. “Linca.” Then she added her species. “Trefalian.” Finally she gestured at the planet. “Trefalia.”


The being who had the most hair nodded and pointed at itself. “Hassan.” Then it pointed at its companions. “Chi. Karla.” Then it circled its hand to indicate them all. “Humans.”


Linca repeated the names as she pointed at each one. Then she used her hands to indicate them all. “Humans.”


The words were odd but easy to say, unlike some of the languages she’d imagined she might hear.


Each humans repeated Linca’s name as well as Trefalian and Trefalia.


Linca turned to bring Jims in on the conversation but he lay on the ground, arms flung to the side where he’d fainted.


With a grin, Linca turned to the humans and pointed backward. “Jims.” She refrained from adding schmuck, but it was a close call.

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Tagline: Sometimes it's best to trust your gut, not your colleagues

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This post is part of the June WEP Challenge: Close Encounters. I loved this movie when I was a kid but haven't seen it in years. I mostly remember the music they used to communicate.

I hope you check out the challenge and I really hope you join in. We're always excited to have new people join! It's so much fun to see where the prompts take people. The first draft I wrote for this prompt involved an unexpected encounter with a bear, but that story disappeared somewhere so you get this one instead


24 comments:

Denise Covey said...

Hey Jemi! Great tale. In this case it was certainly better for Linca to trust her gut, not that schmuck, Jims. Now what's going to happen ? Great close encounter with echoes of the film.

Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost said...

I'm glad Jims got his comeuppance. He was quite a jerk. I've known several like him.

N. R. Williams said...

A twist. We are the aliens. I think that is likely at some point in the future. Well written and made me smile.
Nancy

Olga Godim said...

Oh, lovely - a first contact story, and from the POV of an alien. Nicely done. I wonder how they look, those aliens.

Nilanjana Bose said...

Loved the POV choice! Great encounter and super characterisation. Jims is very convincing, so is Linca. I also like that you leave out descriptions of the Trefalians - only that they have skins that flush. We don't know, do we? They could be blobs of slimy talking jelly. :)

So fun and apt for the prompt.

Pat Garcia said...

Hi,
I love how you introduced the earthly human creatures and your portrayal of Linca.
Excellent!
Shalom shalom

A Hundred Quills said...

Hi Jemi! I enjoyed this so much. The reversal, humans as aliens and Jim at the end ... it all made me smile. Well, you should actually trust your guts and not your colleagues!
-Sonia

Yvonne Osborne said...

I love this! What a clever twist to you tale. It made me smile. And that Jims...what a schmuck!

Jemi Fraser said...

Denise - thanks!

OO - me too! I don't like when the jerks win!

Nancy - thank you!

Olga - a lot of lifeforms have some commonalities, but the differences are the fun part!

Pat - thank you!

Sonia - always trust your gut!

Yvonne - what a schmuck indeed!

Romance Reader said...

Clever twist there. Loved the read.

Hilary Melton-Butcher said...

Hi Jemi - well done ... I now want to see what happens when he (Jims) comes to ... and really meets up with the new species - even if similar to his own. Fun to read and yes I'm glad she followed her own path ... cheers Hilary

Yolanda RenΓ©e said...

Colleagues can be so cruel. Linca was very cool under pressure, admire her. Love that Jim is on the floor. Love the entire story! Well done!

Elephant's Child said...

What a great twist on a first encounter. Trusting your gut is often the way to go.

Jemi Fraser said...

RR - thanks - it was fun to write :)

Hilary - I think Jims might be a bit of a mess for a while!

Yolanda - thanks! It was a fun one :)

Sue - I agree Sue! Our heart and gut usually know what to do

Nas said...

What's going to happen now?

Jamie said...

πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ LOVED this! So easy to identify with Linca. And I love that humans are the aliens. Fantastic job.

Beth Camp said...

Oh, this was so much fun to read. I loved the feisty personality of Linca and her intelligence, revealed in how she communicated for the first time with the 'humans'. Hope to see more of this story. It fits the prompt so well. Sorry I didn't write my WEP this time as I was sick with a very bad cold, but I'll be back . . .

Jemi Fraser said...

Nas - it's going to be fun!

Jamie - thanks so much! I love SF :)

Beth - thank you! I hope you're feeling better soon Beth. Take care of yourself!

J Lenni Dorner said...

Space is vast! Excellent writing here. Love the encounter.

Jemi Fraser said...

J Lenni - thanks! I's mind-boggling how vast space is!

cleemckenzie said...

I really like that moment when everyone acknowledges that there has been an answer! I could hear the crescendo as if this were a movie with music to support the drama. Thanks for this one, Jemi.

Nas said...

I like this read. Clever twist.

Jemi Fraser said...

Lee - thanks - it was a fun build!

Nas - thank you! :)

Kelly Steel said...

Liked this from 'the other' perspective of aliens.